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    May 04

    下雨天...............................................................by 子笛 2005/4/20

    下雨了滴滴答答的

    有人覺得很好聽

    有人覺得很吵

    覺得好聽的人想美妙的雨滴交響曲

    覺得吵的人想雨滴只會滴滴答答吵死了睡覺都睡不著

    一整天只會滴滴答答的

     

    路上半個人都沒有

    只有大樹 小草 小花在

    小動物在小洞裡躲雨或在大樹下躲躲雨

    可是有少數的人撐著傘在外面

    小河的旁邊只有石頭

    有人是開著車 穿著雨衣騎著機車去上班

    大樹在下雨天變得好綠好綠

    小草也綠油油的

    石頭只是靜靜的在一個地方動也不動的坐在一個地方

    小河裡的小魚游來游去

    外面的車子被雨洗得發亮

    讓車子更威風更好看

     

    雨滴越來越少了

    外面也越來越多人了

    車子也變多了

    大家可能已經在準備要去玩了

    上班的人下班

    上課的人下課

    要去玩的人去玩

    但是有人要寫功課

     

    雨停了

    威風的車子帶著我們到外面

    要寫功課的人馬上就寫玩了

    出去玩的人更多了越來越多

    最後大家把頭向上看

    就大叫說有彩虹了

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